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 Jan 3 2006, 11:52 AM
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 fell in love with a boy  Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965  |
I can hear the old birds sing
Like rejoice in something so simple as water A dripping flowing movement of sound I can smell the trees Cedar and pine, bleeding and mending Scarring with the vines I can feel the sun filter down through the canopy and warm selected areas of my body My face, my fingers, my knees... I can see the day beginning A slow walk of the sun I cannot see across that great expanse of sky The cold warmth of the damp ground beneath me as I lay A creature of the forest Safe and away from City's play |
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Jan 3 2006, 05:15 PM
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 I love Havasupai Group: Member Posts: 1,040 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 163,878 |
Nature's ability to restore an urbanized spirit is quite extraordinary. Your writing reminds me of the time I spent in Arizona after living in the din of the LA basin. Thanks for encouraging a moment of peaceful reflection.
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