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technicolour
post Jan 3 2006, 03:42 PM
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show me a garden thats bursting to life
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It's a stanza from this poem thing I wrote, but:

http://www.deviantart.com/view/27213217/

Here you will find our love
Shimmering under the rainbow-lit sky
Better than a pot of gold
you and I will never say goodbye.



I'd really like feedback and ideas too.
 
 
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xosteffanator
post Jan 3 2006, 05:03 PM
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Aww that's cute<3
As for ideas I don't know what would be good to add.
But good job _smile.gif
 

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