My addiction |
 Dec 24 2005, 08:19 PM
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I wrote another one. Its called 'My Addiction':
Infatuate my soul
With your promises Circulate your lies Through my veins Invade my mind Destroy my motives in waves of vanity Mislead me And dispose of me You are my false hope My addiction -Ariel |
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Jan 2 2006, 08:51 AM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
Oh wow, short but very powerful.
Perfect choice of words. I didn't know you could write like this. Call me crazy but i think this is the first piece of writing i've seen from you. Everyone else has mentioned you were a good writer,so when i saw your name in the writing section, i decided to check your writing out. And i can see what people are talking about. You are very good :) |
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ermfermoo My addiction Dec 24 2005, 08:19 PM
stephinika arieelll...
well written. so simple, but i loved ... Dec 25 2005, 01:46 AM annabel_x its really nice written. Dec 26 2005, 11:00 PM davexd cool Dec 27 2005, 01:56 AM LittleLulu ohh thats really good.
such a good mixture of set... Dec 27 2005, 03:21 AM lavadrugs beatuiful well written Dec 27 2005, 01:33 PM banana_jamma damn. on the real =D Dec 30 2005, 01:46 AM
illumineering Oooohhh....that's seductive. It has a pov of ... Jan 2 2006, 11:20 AM |
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