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banana_jamma
post Dec 30 2005, 01:58 AM
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DAM ITS SHELBY
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HiST0RY NEVER
i know god has better for us,
in our timeline of us, i know,
that seperation will only help it grow,
to be true to who we are,
for things we can't control,
it might diverge us as people,
but create a stronger soul.
your shoulder was my fallback,
when tears had found my eyes,
your sleeve there for them to fall on,
it was a relieving sigh,
silence was beauty,
together was forever,
and it will always be
because us "separating"
creates a better you and me.
 
 
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KissMe2408
post Dec 30 2005, 04:51 AM
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Yawn
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QUOTE
your shoulder was my fallback,
when tears had found my eyes,
your sleeve there for them to fall on,
it was a relieving sigh,


Enchanting. ^my fav part.

Great job on this, something about your writing really touches me.
 

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banana_jamma   history never   Dec 30 2005, 01:58 AM
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