Done., [relationships] |
 Sep 10 2004, 12:52 PM
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 I just "got it like that".  Group: Member Posts: 247 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,238  |
Done. by razbus
Well, was it love? I... guess i thought it was. but i was wrong, just a matter of time before things fell apart, didn't take very long, just the thought of you, just the thought of you, ...and now you're gone. Well, now that i made it this far? I...live on without my heart. but some say its better, to have love and lost, but well, i say its better, to have never loved at all, none of this was my idea, it's not my call. It's not my choice in this and you know it's not, so don't act innocent, or play it off. I played the fool but I'm done. (with you) I played the fool but I'm done. (with you) I'm through. |
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Sep 12 2004, 12:03 AM
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 What the fack. Group: Official Member Posts: 6,164 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,519 |
Very truthful, and I can relate. Is this intended to be a song? I can see it work either way, as a song..or a poem. Very good.
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Dec 27 2005, 09:42 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 3,055 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 174,796 |
QUOTE(tainted_angel @ Sep 12 2004, 1:03 AM) Very truthful, and I can relate. Is this intended to be a song? I can see it work either way, as a song..or a poem. Very good.  Yes, I could imagine it as a song. That was pretty good, my language arts teacher would've loved it 
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razbus Done. Sep 10 2004, 12:52 PM
davexd nice Dec 27 2005, 01:39 AM
xl0stxThoughtx that's good Dec 27 2005, 12:50 PM |
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