My addiction |
 Dec 24 2005, 08:19 PM
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I wrote another one. Its called 'My Addiction':
Infatuate my soul
With your promises Circulate your lies Through my veins Invade my mind Destroy my motives in waves of vanity Mislead me And dispose of me You are my false hope My addiction -Ariel |
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Dec 27 2005, 03:21 AM
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ohh thats really good.
such a good mixture of settleness and emotion. |
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ermfermoo My addiction Dec 24 2005, 08:19 PM
stephinika arieelll...
well written. so simple, but i loved ... Dec 25 2005, 01:46 AM annabel_x its really nice written. Dec 26 2005, 11:00 PM davexd cool Dec 27 2005, 01:56 AM lavadrugs beatuiful well written Dec 27 2005, 01:33 PM banana_jamma damn. on the real =D Dec 30 2005, 01:46 AM KissMe2408 Oh wow, short but very powerful.
Perfect choice o... Jan 2 2006, 08:51 AM
illumineering Oooohhh....that's seductive. It has a pov of ... Jan 2 2006, 11:20 AM |
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