Tell me your name, And I'll tell you a story |
 Dec 21 2005, 02:52 AM
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Senior Member  Group: Duplicate Posts: 459 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 308,469  |
Tell me your name and I'll tell you a story
It begins with a man looking out the window Yes, this story is about me, and its about you too I saw you out in the court yard while I was in class My note book was out, but instead of notes I wrote this short story so I can slide it in your locker Now that you've read this story, please Tell me your name |
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Dec 22 2005, 03:15 PM
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 can't touch this Group: Member Posts: 174 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 323,184 |
Wow, I love it. It's got a lot of emotion, and yes, the first and last lines are the best.
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instantmusic Tell me your name Dec 21 2005, 02:52 AM
not_your_average that's adorable. especially this part:
QUOTETe... Dec 21 2005, 05:18 PM iNyCxShoRT I like the first and the last line. Good job, keep... Dec 21 2005, 09:01 PM The Corpse Bride Nice. The "tell me your name and I'll te... Dec 21 2005, 10:13 PM
instantmusic QUOTE(The Corpse Bride @ Dec 21 2005, 10:13 P... Dec 22 2005, 06:52 PM KissMe2408 Ah, that's great =) I loved it.
"Now tha... Dec 22 2005, 03:45 AM lavadrugs It's something new Dec 27 2005, 01:29 PM |
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