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 Dec 13 2005, 09:29 PM
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This just flowed from me. It feels right.
A struggle from inside
Beneath the auricular surface Of a pandemic existance Beneath the flesh and encounters of the known A glory created Disposition A crusade against the mass Against the common form A struggle from inside -Ariel |
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Dec 21 2005, 01:29 PM
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 I love Havasupai Group: Member Posts: 1,040 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 163,878 |
Props to your teachers and/or your ability to express through an innate gift of writing. I hope to see more posts from you in the future. What a wonderful digression from the typical angst and melodrama of this forum!
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ermfermoo From inside Dec 13 2005, 09:29 PM
mzislandpinay thats so emotional. Dec 13 2005, 09:41 PM stephinika beautiful. i liked it. it does have quite the nice... Dec 14 2005, 12:11 AM xblueradiance Oh, I like it! The words you used and the whol... Dec 20 2005, 05:54 PM instantmusic this is nice. sounds like one of those pieces you... Dec 21 2005, 03:01 AM
not_your_average that was awesome! it seemed so genuine and fre... Dec 21 2005, 05:16 PM |
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