We Speak Not Of Miracles, Poem |
 Dec 12 2005, 09:01 PM
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 Crying Behind Blind Eyes  Group: Member Posts: 257 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,967  |
Here's something I wrote about three weeks ago...
----------------------- "We Speak Not Of Miracles" You'd take it all back... If only you could, But the shame and the self-disgust, Cannot, Will not be abandoned. And all the pointing, laughing children on misery street, Come by your house to take in your defeat. With your broken heart and it's broken song, Lacking rhythmn and talent, YOU'RE SO FAR GONE... And your happiness is as fleeting as a miracle. |
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Dec 20 2005, 05:56 PM
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 ...who created this mess...? Group: Member Posts: 451 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 97,244 |
The ending is very nice! You did a good job on this. I like the way it's written.
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Sa-Chan We Speak Not Of Miracles Dec 12 2005, 09:01 PM
KissMe2408 QUOTEWith your broken heart and it's broken so... Dec 18 2005, 04:57 AM Tribal J_Rome damn, i really like this one. good shit :] Dec 18 2005, 05:10 AM instantmusic QUOTE(Sa-Chan @ Dec 12 2005, 9:01 PM)Wit... Dec 21 2005, 02:58 AM jooleeah QUOTEWith your broken heart and it's broken so... Dec 21 2005, 01:59 PM sharpandcuddly This is kickass. :D I love how I can picture it. Dec 22 2005, 03:17 PM
Sa-Chan I just wanted to say thank you to everyone for the... Jan 17 2006, 04:35 PM |
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