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The Creature in the Painting
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post Dec 20 2005, 12:25 AM
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...who created this mess...?
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And as he went,
What did he see?
A fortune so great--
It is a mystery!

The Creature in the Painting,
Lives far, far away.
He smiles and frowns,
But lets his expressions sway.

The Creature in the Painting,
What a genius is he!
How beautiful his loneliness;
What a creature to see!

The Creature in the Painting,
How unique be his seasons:
From a crispy, orange autumn
To a winter so silent and serene.

The Creature in the Painting
Has a queer, sharp action:
He intends to escape
From his unknown factor.

The Creature in the Painting
Lives in the dreams of all.
He enchants greetings,
Leaving a spark of delight.

The Creature in the Painting
Recites a rhythm so smooth,
That one wonders how he makes
A tone so bright.

The Creature in the Painting
Holds a wrinkle in his hand.
How dim and deaf it can be to us,
But so sprightly in this land.

A note is scribbled
To the death of his journey,
For time ceases,
Never to be found.

"What is my purpose here?
What do I mean?
How can I rely on this magic
Right within me?"

The Creature of the Painting
Decided to forget...
...Forget all the thoughts,
All thoughts this moment spreads.

But since then on,
He reminisces a vague
Question;
It lingers in a trap.

A sheer, elegant memory
Is erased from his mind.
But the Creature of the Painting
Shall never remember...
 
 
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illumineering
post Dec 20 2005, 01:05 PM
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I love Havasupai
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That's extraordinary writing! Great job! showoff.gif The look in the mirror this piece demonstrates depicts an uncanny maturity and wisdom. More, please!
 

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