Poems for all the CB writers Options

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For the poet in us all. Dunno if this is the right place for the thread, but here ya go. Feel free to post your poetry... And be open to criticism (hopefully constructive!). Here's one of mine...
Hope you like it. And give some cc plz...Ty

Moral Anaesthesia

We were always barred behind
each other's private walls;
with miles of air and oceanic mass,
words unspoken behind bullet-proof glass.
Helpless and stuck in a mere illusion,
a fleeting moment past much too soon;
the promise of God to a fool,
beauty too pure to ever be true.

I bite my lip as
I kiss you goodbye,
try to look away when
my love flies by.

I bite my lip and
repeat the old lie,
try to look away 'cause
boys
don't
cry.

Tonight you tore down all dreams
built with white lies and deceit.
Where I once stood comfortably numb,
I weep and rot deaf, blind and dumb;
Feast in misery like cheap red wine,
the easiest substitute for the truth.
Moral anaesthesia, morphine for the soul -
the price you pay, for losing control.

I bite my lip as
I kiss you goodbye,
try to look away when
my love flies by.

I bite my lip and
repeat the old lie,
try to look away 'cause
boys
don't
cry.

[expoised]

sing me my song - by melissa (i made it up in math when i was in one of my 'moods)

sing me a song
with your voice like silver
you'll right all my wrongs
with your golden touch
take me along
when you walk by the river
then sing me my song
that i love so much
many a'nights
i wait for the tide
i wait for the light
i wait for my ride
fill me with might
i'm resisting my pride
i've put up a fight
so i can be by your side
now give me the strength
to give you all i can
go longer lengths
let my feet stay on land
bring me a saint
all my enemies banned
the darkness is faint
so lend me your hand
chase away devils
that haunt me in sleep
they've all siezed shovels
they've cut me deep
reprimend rebels
make them all weep
they've thrown little pebbles
while faith i did keep
vengeance, my glory
it was all that i had
my entire story
based on them, who did bad
spent my time mourning
i knew only sad
ignoring the warnings
i saw what i lacked
but you sang me my song
you lay me in sand
you righted my wrongs
monster waves all were banned
you took me along
secured me on land
then you sang me my song
i know i'm safe in your hands