Song (Still Working on It), "You're Right" |
 Dec 11 2005, 03:13 AM
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 Sunlight--shine on me.  Group: Member Posts: 433 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 149,201  |
K SO I recorded a new song and I know a lot of people have already heard it...but It's about this guy I like...anyway...here it is
You're Right opinions? Comments? I think i've improved a little  It's kind of short right now....I'm working it out. It doesn't have brilliant lyrics and its only piano and voice right now. My brother (drums), the guy (piano), and some other people are gonna sit down together and jam and write out stuffffff  I'm not sure how that's gonna go down...ANYWAY LISTEN TO ITT!! haha <33 |
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Dec 12 2005, 01:07 AM
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 you`re undeniable Group: Member Posts: 1,136 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 283,828 |
it's really pretty/cute. i love your voice, and especially the echos. so pretty.
 i think the only thing is how at points when you make your voice loud, it seems kind of sudden, like you are randomly shouting into the microphone... maybe if it was more of a crescendo? anyway, 100000000x times better than i could ever do. |
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EriaNight Song (Still Working on It) Dec 11 2005, 03:13 AM
KissMe2408 hey, you have a really pretty voice :) And yes, I... Dec 12 2005, 12:39 AM mzkandi Very nice, I like your voice. Dec 12 2005, 12:41 AM Hiphop d[-_-]b You have a really pretty/nice voice. The lyrics ar... Dec 12 2005, 12:48 AM
Rachel is love QUOTE(Hiphop d[-_-]b @ Dec... Dec 12 2005, 02:41 PM -lana aw, good job, i really like your voice. Dec 12 2005, 04:17 PM Levy2k6 what exactly is gonna happen with this song? are u... Dec 12 2005, 05:00 PM |
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