this is sad, a sad lil love story Options

[jEllyBeaNs]

Boy: baby we need to talk
> Girl: ricardo, wat do u mean?
> Boy: sumthin has come up...
> Girl: wat? Wuts wrong? Is it bad?
> Boy: i dont want to hurt u baby
> Girl: *thinks* omg i hope he doesnt break up with me... I love him so much
> Boy: baby are you there??
> Girl: yea im here wut is so important??
> Boy: im not sure if i should say
> Girl: well u already brought it up, so please just tell me.
> Boy: im leaving....
> Girl: baby wut are u talking about?? I dont want u to leave me, i love you
> Boy: not like that, i mean im moving far away
> Girl: why? All of ur famliy lives over here.
> Boy: well my father is sending me away to a boarding skool far away.
> Girl: i cant believe this.

> [FATHER: (picks up tha other fone, interrupts & yells furiously) ERiKA, wat did i tell you about talking to boys?!!!!!....Get off the damn fone!! (And hangs up)]
> Boy: wow ur father sounds really mad
> Girl: u know how he gets, but anywayz i dont want you to go
> Boy: would you run away with me?
> Girl: baby, u know i would, i would do anything for u, but i cant... U dont know wut would happen if i did. My dad would kill me !!
> Boy: *sad* its ok i understand i guess..
> Girl: *thinking* i cant believe wuts going on
> Boy: i need to give u sumthing 2nite b/c i am leaving on flight 1-80 in tha morning, so i need to see you now.
> Girl: ok i will sneak out & meet u at tha park
> Boy: ok ill meet u there in 20min

> [They meet at a nearby park, they both hug eachother. And he gives her a note.]
> Boy: here u go, this is for you i gotta go.
> Girl: ****tear (begins to cry)
> Boy: baby dont cry, u know i love you...but i have 2 go
> Girl: ok (begins to walk away)

> [They both go back home. And erika begins to read tha letter he gave her] It says.....

> Erika,
U probably already know that im leaving, i knew this would be better if i wrote a letter explaining tha truth about how much i care about you. The truth is, is that i never loved you, i hated you so much, u are my bitch and dont u ever forget that. I never cared about you, and never wanted to talk to you, n be around u. U really have no clue how much i hate you. Now that im leaving i thought u should know that i hate you bitch, u never did tha right thing, and u were never there. I didnt think i could hate someone as much as i hate you. And i never want to see you, for the rest of my life, i will never miss kissing you like before, i never want to cuddle up, how we used to. I will not miss you and thats a promise. U never had my love, and i want you to remember that. Bitch u keep this letter bcuz this may be tha last thing u have from me. f**k, I hate you so much. i will not talk to you soon bitch.... Goodbye
- Ricardo

> [ erika begins to cry, she throws tha paper in tha garbage & crys for hours ]
....A day passes, she is sad, depressed and she feels so lonely.... Then she gets a fone call....
> Friend: how are u feeling?
> Girl: i just cant believe this happend i thought he loved me.
> Friend: o, about that. Ricardo left me a msg. A few days ago. He told me to tell u to look in ur jacket pocket or something...
> Girl: ummm ok
> [She finds a piece of paper in tha jacket, It says. Baby i hope u find this before u read my letter. I knew ur dad might read it, so i switched a few words...
> Hate = Love
> Never = Alwayz
> Bitch = Baby
> Will not= will
> ........ I hope u didnt take that seriously because i love you with all my heart, and it was so hard to let you go thats y i wanted u to run away with me...
> -Ricardo]
Girl: omg its a letter, Ricardo does love me!!, he must of slipped it into my pocket when he hugged me. I cant believe how stupid I am!!
> Friend: lol ok but i g2g... Call me later
> Girl: *happy*ok bye, i'll be at home waiting for my baby to call me !!
> ...... Erika turns tha T.V. on......
> [Breaking news] "An airplane has crashed. Over 47young boys died, we are still searching for Survivors...This is a tragedy we will never forget, this plane was flight 1-80...it was on its way to anall boys boarding school..." Reporter says.
> [ she turns off the tv....3 days later, she kills herself, because of tha fact that Ricardo wa dead & she had nothing to Live for... ] ....A day after that the fone rings. Nobody answers.
> It was Ricardo, he called to leave a msg. "Its Ricardo, i guess ur not home so, I called 2 let u know that im alive, i missed my flight b/c i had 2 see u one last time. So i hope ur not worried. I am staying for good. Sorry if u got scared, i promise 2 make it up 2 ueverything will be a be ok i love you so much...call me asap bye!!
[...he eventually finds out wut happend, and also kills himself...]

[ApocalypseAelis]

I guess it's sad...

it would be better if the grammar was better...

kind of cliche though. ._. And unrealistic...sorry...that's just how I feel.

[Jane Doe.]

I guess it's sad...

it would be better if the grammar was better...

yeah..I agree. sort of..Romeo and Juliet-like. sort of.

damnit I hate that name.