this is sad, a sad lil love story |
this is sad, a sad lil love story |
Dec 11 2005, 02:33 AM
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![]() Jus Sweet Chocolate ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 739 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 216,959 |
Boy: baby we need to talk
> Girl: ricardo, wat do u mean? > Boy: sumthin has come up... > Girl: wat? Wuts wrong? Is it bad? > Boy: i dont want to hurt u baby > Girl: *thinks* omg i hope he doesnt break up with me... I love him so much > Boy: baby are you there?? > Girl: yea im here wut is so important?? > Boy: im not sure if i should say > Girl: well u already brought it up, so please just tell me. > Boy: im leaving.... > Girl: baby wut are u talking about?? I dont want u to leave me, i love you > Boy: not like that, i mean im moving far away > Girl: why? All of ur famliy lives over here. > Boy: well my father is sending me away to a boarding skool far away. > Girl: i cant believe this. > [FATHER: (picks up tha other fone, interrupts & yells furiously) ERiKA, wat did i tell you about talking to boys?!!!!!....Get off the damn fone!! (And hangs up)] > Boy: wow ur father sounds really mad > Girl: u know how he gets, but anywayz i dont want you to go > Boy: would you run away with me? > Girl: baby, u know i would, i would do anything for u, but i cant... U dont know wut would happen if i did. My dad would kill me !! > Boy: *sad* its ok i understand i guess.. > Girl: *thinking* i cant believe wuts going on > Boy: i need to give u sumthing 2nite b/c i am leaving on flight 1-80 in tha morning, so i need to see you now. > Girl: ok i will sneak out & meet u at tha park > Boy: ok ill meet u there in 20min > [They meet at a nearby park, they both hug eachother. And he gives her a note.] > Boy: here u go, this is for you i gotta go. > Girl: ****tear (begins to cry) > Boy: baby dont cry, u know i love you...but i have 2 go > Girl: ok (begins to walk away) > [They both go back home. And erika begins to read tha letter he gave her] It says..... > Erika, U probably already know that im leaving, i knew this would be better if i wrote a letter explaining tha truth about how much i care about you. The truth is, is that i never loved you, i hated you so much, u are my bitch and dont u ever forget that. I never cared about you, and never wanted to talk to you, n be around u. U really have no clue how much i hate you. Now that im leaving i thought u should know that i hate you bitch, u never did tha right thing, and u were never there. I didnt think i could hate someone as much as i hate you. And i never want to see you, for the rest of my life, i will never miss kissing you like before, i never want to cuddle up, how we used to. I will not miss you and thats a promise. U never had my love, and i want you to remember that. Bitch u keep this letter bcuz this may be tha last thing u have from me. f**k, I hate you so much. i will not talk to you soon bitch.... Goodbye - Ricardo > [ erika begins to cry, she throws tha paper in tha garbage & crys for hours ] ....A day passes, she is sad, depressed and she feels so lonely.... Then she gets a fone call.... > Friend: how are u feeling? > Girl: i just cant believe this happend i thought he loved me. > Friend: o, about that. Ricardo left me a msg. A few days ago. He told me to tell u to look in ur jacket pocket or something... > Girl: ummm ok > [She finds a piece of paper in tha jacket, It says. Baby i hope u find this before u read my letter. I knew ur dad might read it, so i switched a few words... > Hate = Love > Never = Alwayz > Bitch = Baby > Will not= will > ........ I hope u didnt take that seriously because i love you with all my heart, and it was so hard to let you go thats y i wanted u to run away with me... > -Ricardo] Girl: omg its a letter, Ricardo does love me!!, he must of slipped it into my pocket when he hugged me. I cant believe how stupid I am!! > Friend: lol ok but i g2g... Call me later > Girl: *happy*ok bye, i'll be at home waiting for my baby to call me !! > ...... Erika turns tha T.V. on...... > [Breaking news] "An airplane has crashed. Over 47young boys died, we are still searching for Survivors...This is a tragedy we will never forget, this plane was flight 1-80...it was on its way to anall boys boarding school..." Reporter says. > [ she turns off the tv....3 days later, she kills herself, because of tha fact that Ricardo wa dead & she had nothing to Live for... ] ....A day after that the fone rings. Nobody answers. > It was Ricardo, he called to leave a msg. "Its Ricardo, i guess ur not home so, I called 2 let u know that im alive, i missed my flight b/c i had 2 see u one last time. So i hope ur not worried. I am staying for good. Sorry if u got scared, i promise 2 make it up 2 ueverything will be a be ok i love you so much...call me asap bye!! [...he eventually finds out wut happend, and also kills himself...] |
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pastellove_ i read this on my friends xanga last time.
it... Dec 11 2005, 03:00 AM
ApocalypseAelis I guess it's sad...
it would be better if the... Dec 11 2005, 04:17 AM
Julie. QUOTE(ApocalypseAelis @ Dec 11 2005, 1:17 AM)... Dec 11 2005, 04:35 AM
silver rain QUOTE(ApocalypseAelis @ Dec 11 2005, 4:17 AM)... Dec 11 2005, 02:19 PM
_sarcastic_ that is pretty sad.
^agreed. it's like romeo... Dec 11 2005, 08:07 AM
Fade to Black lol, nice story. how'd they kill themselves? d... Dec 11 2005, 08:58 AM
mzbbc that is so sad. it reminds me of that story... you... Dec 11 2005, 01:58 PM
d4z3 How Ironic.
I agree with the people above me, the... Dec 11 2005, 02:27 PM
liquidize I LOVE THIS STORY! Dec 11 2005, 06:28 PM
Shortiiex wow..great story!
but what a typical love stor... Dec 11 2005, 09:04 PM
xoxo_koala_kisses_ It's pretty obvious this was written by some 1... Dec 11 2005, 09:17 PM
KissMe2408 Hey.
Ok for 1 this should be in Writing.
And 2, th... Dec 12 2005, 02:49 AM![]() ![]() |