not really you Options

[akjsd]

i look at your face, and it radiates pain,
your smile has been washed off by the rain .
your eyes tell a story of a thousand years,
they seem to cry without dropping a tear .
they're dull and they're dead, they used to be bright,
your cheeks are hollowed by worry and fright .
your lips are pale, no smile lingers,
from it escapes such ghastly pictures .
what happens to the happy girl i knew ?
you're still the same person--yet its not really you .

just remember that theres a rainbow at the end of every storm .
and the sound of your own laughter has the power to keep you warm .
please tell a story that has a happy ending,
paint pictures of memories and happy reminiscing .
and light up a smile that can build fire out of ashes
rise from your sorrow like a newborn pheonix .

[Tribal J_Rome]

very nice indeed, i wish i was able to write that well