Twiggy, First colourization ever Options

[Stephire]

Original(Which was later greysacled)

Then mine:

(Thumbed)
Be nice, this was my first. XD

Edit;;
Well I took it all in and I think this one is better, Though I still used the same makeup colors because I personally like those colors :p. ^_^:
Before
&After:

[blackxpearl]

The first one is really good, I would just make the skin a tiny bit darker and feather the eye makeup a bit more.
The second one, the skin is too weird. The lips look a little weird too, I would try using not so saturated colours. You kinda go outside the face a little bit and I would make the hair a different colour. Probably add some blusher too.
But overall, it's really good. Just remember to use more natural colours, and less saturated colours, especially for the skin. Takes me ages to do the skin. Trial and error, is the best way to learn though right?
But yeah, it's REALLY good. Nice pictures too, nothing obstructing the face, making it harder to select. EEk I hate that, you get a nice picture only to find that you have loads of grass to go around or hair. But yeah, good choice in pictures.
Very well done