The Big Lie, MTV Hollywood etc. |
 Nov 25 2005, 05:02 PM
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Hello everyone I wrote an article about how the big media machine is lying to us all. Check it out http://freakmag.com/The_Vibe/The_Big_Lie.html All opinions are apreciated.
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Nov 25 2005, 05:13 PM
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 Don't worry guys, size doesn't matter...to lesbians Group: Member Posts: 2,444 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,066 |
1.) i think this belongs to Writing
2.) this is more of an opiniated way to convince someone to boycott buying artists' merchandise 3.) it's kinda one-sided 4.) it's too short 5.) it's repetitive 6.) sounds like you're preaching 7.) you need to elaborate on the big lie |
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Nov 25 2005, 05:17 PM
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 Bay Area YadadaDiiiig. Group: Official Member Posts: 4,249 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 103,202 |
QUOTE(andromeda_90 @ Nov 25 2005, 3:13 PM) 1.) i think this belongs to Writing 2.) this is more of an opiniated way to convince someone to boycott buying artists' merchandise 3.) it's kinda one-sided 4.) it's too short 5.) it's repetitive 6.) sounds like you're preaching 7.) you need to elaborate on the big lie  I agree. It took me a while to comprehend the sentences too. |
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aceweaver The Big Lie Nov 25 2005, 05:02 PM
i heart john Your opening sentence was a little hard to follow.... Nov 25 2005, 05:13 PM
iNyCxShoRT QUOTE(andromeda_90 @ Nov 25 2005, 5:13 PM)1.)... Nov 25 2005, 05:17 PM mzkandi Moved to Writing Nov 25 2005, 05:47 PM Chii the things those celebrities do is for entertainme... Nov 25 2005, 10:05 PM oneandonlytammie It didn't hold my interest enough for me to fi... Nov 26 2005, 12:41 PM
Hiphop d[-_-]b QUOTE(oneandonlytammie @ Nov 26 2005, 10:41 A... Nov 26 2005, 05:22 PM celticsluvr i guess its true about the 'air'? but ever... Nov 26 2005, 03:22 PM |
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