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azn_at_heart
post Nov 10 2005, 09:18 AM
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some reason i feel alone...guess cus my true self is never shown
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post ure oldest poems here and tell y , maybe out of being bored or for someone else
 
 
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gr00vyswordsman
post Nov 16 2005, 03:13 PM
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my oldest poem I can find. I wrote this for a girl I had a crush on


From every breath
And every moment in time,
How doth a day like that come to be
When you’re in a world that is always changing.
This broken world, it’s sometimes hard to see.
Depict all of days’ happenings.
All seasons never spoke or changed.
When last weeks of Spring came,
Surely did Spring speak with me.

She accompanied me not with sorrow,
but addressed me with fervent feelings
she took my hand, looked into my eyes,
she left my senses reeling.
she brought along a sincere friend to forever keep,
one who would join in with her laughter and also to weep.

My world of lost hope,
straight lines of life without curves,
Without hope, life is just nothing but despair.
You, my new friend from Spring, relinquished me from lost hope,
Twas brought a great friend I will hold dear.
What splendiferous personality she carries
When you look past her exterior beauty.
My new friend, her personality blossoms in her attire.
This beauty is irresistibly mesmerizing.
She is always beautiful,
when fully clothed.

You will always be Spring to me.
 

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