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skirls in the attic, poor little kid
RiddleMeWonders
post Nov 9 2005, 02:17 PM
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Alyson woke to the sound of thumps in the cieling
Critters crawling up and down through boards and beams
She shrieked a sissy's scream and fell from her bed
"DADDY!"

In he rushed, bat in hand
turned a circle and said "What's the matter pumpkin?"
"Something's in the cieling and I'm really scared
Don't make me go back to bed, not up there."

He picked her up and put her back on the top bunk
"You've got to be brave, got to toughen up."
"But it wasnt my imagination, I know there's something there"
"We'll see about it tomorrow, go to bed Alys dear."

An hour passed and she woke again, this time to movement on her bed
tiny little eyes, hairy little feet with claws
Then she knew what was in the attic and screamed without pause
 
 
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post Nov 9 2005, 03:07 PM
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ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! this is a nice poem! i love the way it ends ehhehe :)
 

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RiddleMeWonders   skirls in the attic   Nov 9 2005, 02:17 PM
_suzie_   ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! this is a nice poem...   Nov 9 2005, 03:07 PM
torngemini   that was so cute!   Nov 9 2005, 03:12 PM
RiddleMeWonders   We were having little poem wars. The creature on ...   Nov 9 2005, 09:29 PM
Bobblehead425   lol iuts like "i told you so daddy" too...   Nov 10 2005, 01:57 PM


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