Lies in Japan, poem |
| *torngemini* |
 Oct 28 2005, 07:14 PM
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My Dream lies in Japan
(10/28/05) I was left empty handed last August I thought I knew what my life was for Now that he walked away I don't know anymore He walked away, took a plane My dream lies in Japan. I walk aimlessly through the crowd Singing the same sad song Since he walked away It's the only song I know He walked away, took a plane My dream lies in Japan. An empty shell is all that's left of me I only wish for ignorance to come back and be kind Everything that I am walked away Because my mind is the only thing that's alive As I remembered he walked away, took a plane My dream lies in Japan. My words put on a funny show for people to see A deceivable smile crosses my lips I held my ground day after day My happiness walked away But I never dared showed I'm torn apart Since the day he walked away, took a plane My dream lies in Japan. I look to the stars Wondering if making a wish will make a point What I believed in is shadowed Who I was was taken away Such a questionable belief in love now I will never forget the day he walked away, took a plane My dream lies in Japan. My only dream lies in Japan. |
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| *jooleeah* |
Oct 28 2005, 09:00 PM
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What a nice piece of writing. It creates a nice image in my mind. Wonderful job.
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torngemini Lies in Japan Oct 28 2005, 07:14 PM
azn_at_heart thats really good and i think that realy happened ... Oct 28 2005, 07:55 PM
torngemini QUOTE(azn_at_heart @ Oct 28 2005, 5:55 PM)tha... Oct 30 2005, 06:48 PM o0olaalaa o0o thats really good! great job Oct 30 2005, 08:21 PM Blue-Chan I really love this work.
Wonderful job! Oct 30 2005, 10:43 PM mizz_americaz thats really well written
really beautiful =) Oct 30 2005, 10:44 PM |
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