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 Oct 21 2005, 04:30 PM
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Hmm heres another one just to add .
My life so vacant robbed of words no one can understand how I feel my heart so enclosed robbed of feelings no one can open and see how I feel My mind so empty robbed of thoughts robbed of everything I have I gave it all away just because I chose to live life in a sinful way |
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Oct 25 2005, 03:35 PM
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Haha I don't think free write would need such things. -____-;; Its the way the poet views it.. I don't really care about how bad it may be and such. as long as I enjoyed it and I like it nothing else matters.
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rainnydaiis Life so vacant Oct 21 2005, 04:30 PM
Midnight Faerie Wow, I really liked that. It's effective in i... Oct 21 2005, 11:15 PM mipadi I don't know, I feel like it doesn't reall... Oct 23 2005, 08:24 PM not_your_average ^ Agreed. I didn't really feel anything after ... Oct 23 2005, 08:29 PM
KissMe2408 ^exactly!
I think it was great :) I liked how... Oct 26 2005, 03:37 PM mipadi QUOTE(KissMe2408 @ Oct 26 2005, 4:37 PM)^exac... Oct 26 2005, 03:40 PM |
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