Remember, short poem I came up with.... |
Remember, short poem I came up with.... |
Oct 19 2005, 05:13 PM
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![]() Koorime ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 153 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 237,135 |
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Do I know you? I don't know who you are I don't remember you Quit calling my name I see you staring at me I don't remember you I won't answer Lost in the fog Of my forgotten memories I don't remember you? Have you forgottten me? Cause I finally femember you. I think that this is one of my better poems that I've written. |
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Oct 24 2005, 07:40 PM
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very sharp and direct ... nice
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Dark's Angel Remember Oct 19 2005, 05:13 PM
___misshilton i like it... :D very neat... got anymore??? Oct 19 2005, 05:25 PM
Dark's Angel I'm glad that you liked it. Here's another... Oct 19 2005, 05:47 PM
iNyCxShoRT I like it. Very straight and to the point. Bravo. Oct 24 2005, 08:00 PM
Dark's Angel Thanks. Sometimes they can get pretty dark...it ju... Oct 26 2005, 06:35 PM![]() ![]() |