Delusions in Love, a mind divided, a love lost to fear |
 Sep 17 2005, 04:07 AM
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Delusions in Love
Standing here on solid ground My place I finally found So safe within a warm embrace Nothing can go wrong with the warm sun on my face But then the ground below cracks in three Reality I now see My mind divided as I look for me And then I see his face On solid ground, still in grace But he’s so far away I shout “I love you” and out of fear I stay And a hand appears much closer now I want to reach but don’t know how He grabs my hand and pulls me The ground below him I did not see It’s even more cracked than mine It’s falling apart but he walks like it’s all fine He’s lived on the broken ground for many a day He’s been broken so long that he knows the way But I know now that this is not okay He leads me down the highway to hell When I strayed from my love, my soul I did sell I wake inside a freezing sweat Glad that’s not the fate I met But as I look around That same scene I have found I’m pushing love away Moving to another as I stray Towards the end, my dying day |
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Oct 6 2005, 06:22 PM
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very well done. i like the layout and just how you put it together. keep it up.
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ursedonah Delusions in Love Sep 17 2005, 04:07 AM
Paradox of Life AHH. I love it! It's so mysterious and you... Sep 17 2005, 09:20 AM rainnydaiis Very nice choice of word. It makes you feel like y... Oct 5 2005, 04:31 PM
Tribal J_Rome damn, i love it. i especially love that last stanz... Oct 6 2005, 11:46 PM |
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