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 Sep 29 2005, 08:32 PM
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 LunchboxXx  Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810  |
i know it's not good. i like it, though. as i lay dying meets from first to last. i hope when one hears it they simultaniously burst into tears and go berzerk.
OUR CRUMBLING PALACE I have a habit of bad decisions Along with a knack for ruining everything These walls can't save us now As they slowly but surely melt into the ground Watch where you stand I ruin everything I swear to god Slip out of my hands I ruin everything I swear to god I try to hold the roof up Protect us from our inevitable demise Debris descending, you don't deserve this Leave me here in my ruin. In our crumbling palace Watch where you stand I ruin everything I swear to god Slip out of my hands I ruin everything I swear to god All of our dreams crashing down All of our hopes falling down All of our dreams crashing down Everything collapses From day one I knew this would happen I ruin everything I swear to god |
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Sep 30 2005, 07:16 PM
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 Lauren loves YOU. Group: Member Posts: 2,357 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 32,793 |
What are you talking about? Of course, it's good.
If I weren't on my uppers, I would have cried while reading this. I can totally relate to it. The chorus is powerful, and I love this verse: QUOTE I try to hold the roof up Protect us from our inevitable demise Debris descending, you don't deserve this Leave me here in my ruin. In our crumbling palace I got a good sense of imagery from it, and it's a great metaphor for this subject. |
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ryfitaDF our crumbeling palace Sep 29 2005, 08:32 PM
helllla jankyyyy Wow. I really like this. What are you talking abou... Oct 1 2005, 11:38 PM
ryfitaDF QUOTE(helllla jankyyyy @ Oct 1 2005, 11:38 PM... Oct 2 2005, 01:33 PM helllla jankyyyy QUOTE(ryfitaDF @ Oct 2 2005, 1:33 PM)carpentr... Oct 2 2005, 01:34 PM Paradox of Life Wow, amazing. I love it! I love the word choic... Oct 2 2005, 11:12 AM |
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