new layout....., [Hip-Rock3]Setsujou Danka Options

[pahyphesis]

So this is a layout I made for my own xanga(the one I posted here before was for someone else) and its another simple one(since i'm still going to get better). Anyways its based on another song from Pop'n Music 12 Iroha called called [Hip-Rock3] Setsujou Danka by Des-ROW Gumi.

Hip-Rock=Hip-hop+Rock, if you wanted to know why the title is like that. And it features its character called Roku who is in the game. The words "Exposing everthing and destroying it like an idiot" are there becuase its an actual lyric that the rapper Tsuboi raps in Japanese and it sorta fits the character Roku

So here is the link:

[Hip-Rock3]Setsujou Danka

here's the banner of the song from the game of the title and Roku:



Setsujou Danka translates into "Flame Failure on Snow" and is the song playing on my site.
so again give me constructive critisism and comments. thanks in advance.

[illyria]

i think it looks better. i think it looks just fine without the inner lines. much better. good job!