Let Me Cry, poem |
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 Sep 16 2005, 06:25 PM
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I want to cry
But the tears won't come. I closed myself for so long I just don't know how to feel. Emotions so held in, Shut so tight ... My hands are trembling, Scattering all through my body, But I still can't cry Please let me cry The lights are down, The air is so cold. I'm all alone with a pain So unbearable that I want to die. It won't make me leave it all behind But I still can't cry Please let me cry. Sleepless nights, Dry eyes so wide To images of things I don't want to see It's breaking me, It's taking over me But I still can't cry Please let me cry. I will do anything, I will give anything, Just let me cry Please ... Let me cry ... |
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Sep 17 2005, 12:41 AM
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 Yawn  Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
QUOTE The lights are down, The air is so cold. I'm all alone with a pain So unbearable that I want to die. It won't make me leave it all behind ^love that part. exactly how i feel. I think you did an amazing job with the poem and really expressed yourself here. You did a great job, and please keep writing |
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torngemini Let Me Cry Sep 16 2005, 06:25 PM
LoST SouL there r so many days i feel like tat Sep 16 2005, 07:08 PM helllla jankyyyy I love this, really. Good job. Sep 16 2005, 09:27 PM stephinika well written, i like it. i like the concept behind... Sep 16 2005, 11:15 PM yukichan Omg..
That is exactly how I was feeling..
Everythi... Sep 18 2005, 04:21 AM Claudel I like the way you're pointing out your feelin... Sep 18 2005, 05:40 AM azn_at_heart so sad Sep 27 2005, 08:34 PM rainnydaiis Nice on how you poured yourself out in just a few ... Oct 4 2005, 04:26 PM
Bridget_rules_4eva thats how i feel sometimes... Oct 8 2005, 03:46 PM |
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