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lilxroxy
post Sep 15 2005, 07:12 AM
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I hug you, I laugh with you. I tease you. I laugh at you…but the truth is that I love you.
You hug me. You laugh with me. You tease me. You laugh at me…but the truth is that you love her.
You are everything I ever needed…everything I ever wanted.
You mean so much to me…how did I make such a mistake as to not letting you know?


Why bother to get my hopes up when it’s all going to be shattered into pieces in the end? Whenever I am with you, I am free…I am careless…I believe…
You were everything I ever needed…everything I ever wanted.
You mean so much to me…how did I make such a mistake as to not letting you know?


I can’t understand why your smile can make me so happy, and leave me breathless. Yet, my smile can’t cheer you up when you’re down; leave you breathless when you’re calm. Didn’t you know you were everything?
You were everything I ever needed…everything I ever wanted.
You mean so much to me…how did I make such a mistake as to not letting you know?


How can I make you see?
I’ll be your cloud up in the sky
And your shoulder when you cry.
You were everything I ever needed…everything I ever wanted.
You mean so much to me…how did I make such a mistake as to not letting you know?


I hugged you, I laughed with you. I teased you. I laughed at you…but the truth is that I loved you.
You hugged me. You laughed with me. You teased me. You laughed at me…but the truth is that you loved her.
And when I moved on, you tell me I’m the meaning in your life.
I am everything you’ll ever need…everything you’ll ever want.
I meant so much to you…how did you make such a mistake as to not letting me know?

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it's not completely my own work.. there are some lyrics in it rolleyes.gif
 
 
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*mishyerr*
post Sep 15 2005, 08:56 PM
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reminds me of the song "solitude" by evanescence.

it's so sad. (your poem)

but a great poem. :)
 

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lilxroxy   mistake   Sep 15 2005, 07:12 AM
mishyerr   reminds me of the song "solitude" by eva...   Sep 15 2005, 08:56 PM
torngemini   awwww it's so sad but I love it!! I...   Sep 16 2005, 06:17 PM
lilxroxy   : ) why, thank you : D   Dec 1 2005, 04:14 AM


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