Sweet Surrender Options

[*torngemini*]

SWEET SURRENDER
05/06/05


Here I am,
Vulnerability melting into my soul
This is the way I wanted to be for you
The light in a distant corner
As I let you undress me
Not afraid of the scars I have
So deeply wounded on my body
Make love to me one more time
Use the sharp edge to heal me
Only you can save me

Sweet surrender
Feeling like I lost myself forever
Oh how I wish this was real
Only in my dreams
Do we meet this way again

I've lost myself once again
Now that I'm near you
The air is still there
And though it may change direction
You are still here to guide me
If you don't let go completely.
Hurt me if you need to
Drown me with your burdens of who you are
I don't mind,
I have my own thorns for you
To feel and bleed from

Sweet surrender
Feeling like I lost myself forever
Oh how I wish this was real
Only in my dreams
Do we meet this way again

You say you love me
And I'll believe it,
You say you need me
And you would mean it
Wouldn't that have been so nice?

Sweet surrender
Feeling like I lost myself forever
When can this be real?
Only in my dreams
Do we meet this way again

[Midnight Faerie]

Woah. That's very good. Wonderfully written and it flows smoothly. I can relate to this, so I admire this piece.