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 Sep 6 2005, 11:58 PM
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LOVE
An eternal despair fills thys pure heart With a single doubt of fear cross thou eyes With shattering glass filled with abstract art Nocturnal darkness covers thys disguise Thy lays one eye on thees exquisite face And thy canst not remove thees hooked beauty Remnants blood from thou veins, enmity trace Amorous glance until thy off duty Thou shall remove complete vindication Eliminating dried color blood stain The mountains roars with acceleration And thou shall let go of revenge and pain Thou and thee, is our love true and pure With dove settings in the sky fills obscure |
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Sep 11 2005, 02:01 PM
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er, some of what Mipadi said.
But it's pretty intense, and I like it. ^_^ |
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xtremeliquid Love Sep 6 2005, 11:58 PM
rinchan089 Aww... It's so pretty... I love it!
Rin-c... Sep 7 2005, 09:27 AM Paradox of Life Wow, that's a wonderful poem, sweet poem. I lo... Sep 8 2005, 05:49 PM mipadi Your use of thee, thy, thou, and thine are incorre... Sep 9 2005, 03:29 PM xstab.my.heartx Wow.
Haha.
That's deep. Sep 11 2005, 01:53 PM
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