What's Missing, <that's the title |
 Sep 2 2005, 05:40 AM
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What's Missing
As i sit in silence, i begin to wonder- do i make you laugh? do i make you think? do i make you smile? then what's missing- do i make you remember? do i make you forget? do i make you wish? so tell me what's left? do i make you happy? do i make you sad? do i get you angry? do i make you mad? what else is there to make you fall for me? I'm all the things anyone could ever want- or so it seems you've got other needs- don't i make you who you want to be? don't i clear your eyes so that you can see? Tell me, tell me, do i make you... do i make you laugh? do i make you think? do i make you smile? then what's missing- do i make you remember? do i make you forget? do i make you wish? so tell me what's left? i begin to wonder- do i make you happy? do i make you sad? do i get you angry? do i make you mad? As i sit in silence, i begin to wonder- |
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Sep 9 2005, 11:00 PM
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 My name's Katt. Nice to meet you! Group: Member Posts: 3,826 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,674 |
Very nice. I think the ending could've been better, but I just loooove the whole theme of the poem. Well done!
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sikdragon What's Missing Sep 2 2005, 05:40 AM
moorepocket bad break up? Anyway, it's good. I like it. Sep 9 2005, 06:11 PM torngemini that was soo nice!! is it a poem or a song... Sep 10 2005, 01:06 AM
sikdragon It's gonna be a song. I'm working on getti... Sep 16 2005, 03:19 AM |
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