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 Sep 8 2005, 04:51 PM
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 My desperate heart is far too weak to run for you this long.  Group: Member Posts: 640 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 150,342  |
in the rain
drowning the pain away saying goodbye to day good day and goodnight i'll say as i'm drifting away |
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Sep 9 2005, 05:29 PM
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It's kinda corny...like a Dr. Seuss poem. Try to keep it balanced and also listen to the above ^ advice too.
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