Valiant Ones, A poem deidicated to the military... |
 Sep 6 2005, 10:14 PM
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*~*Valiant Ones*~*
A you are tearing for those On the battlefield, One thought comes to mind that causes Other thoughts to yield. Maybe these souls didn't die in Vain, Maybe these souls didn't feel the Pain, For their minds were set on Just one small thing. They didn't need to feel, didn't Need to think. For as they lie here, crimson Mixing with the mud, They live on because there's Honor Running in their blood... by Rin-chan |
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Sep 9 2005, 12:25 AM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
Im glad you wrote something for the people who died in the war my dad lost his two friends who died in iraq on monday couple of days ago Helicopter got shot down and now Im praying for my dad's safety while hes there in iraq other than that nice writing piece
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rinchan089 Valiant Ones Sep 6 2005, 10:14 PM
kyttiekatt sad.
thats all i hav to say. (except for "tha... Sep 7 2005, 12:08 PM rinchan089 Thanks for reading it, but I don't think it... Sep 7 2005, 12:55 PM yukichan Kind of scares me because my friend is planning to... Sep 9 2005, 03:01 AM rinchan089 Aww... thanks!
I'll pray for your father ... Sep 9 2005, 10:25 PM Paradox of Life I don't really like the rhyme scheme. All your... Sep 9 2005, 11:02 PM torngemini I liked it and I kinda like it when some people wr... Sep 10 2005, 01:08 AM
rinchan089 ^^^ Thanks, alot.
Personally, the poem isn't ... Sep 10 2005, 10:41 AM |
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