Valiant Ones, A poem deidicated to the military... |
 Sep 6 2005, 10:14 PM
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 What up, dawg?  Group: Member Posts: 235 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 19,480  |
*~*Valiant Ones*~*
A you are tearing for those On the battlefield, One thought comes to mind that causes Other thoughts to yield. Maybe these souls didn't die in Vain, Maybe these souls didn't feel the Pain, For their minds were set on Just one small thing. They didn't need to feel, didn't Need to think. For as they lie here, crimson Mixing with the mud, They live on because there's Honor Running in their blood... by Rin-chan |
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Sep 7 2005, 12:55 PM
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What up, dawg? Group: Member Posts: 235 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 19,480 |
Thanks for reading it, but I don't think it's sad at all. They will live on because people will remember how they died valiantly, hence the title.
 Thanks again for reading!Rin-chan |
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rinchan089 Valiant Ones Sep 6 2005, 10:14 PM
kyttiekatt sad.
thats all i hav to say. (except for "tha... Sep 7 2005, 12:08 PM dispn0ygonekrazy Im glad you wrote something for the people who die... Sep 9 2005, 12:25 AM yukichan Kind of scares me because my friend is planning to... Sep 9 2005, 03:01 AM rinchan089 Aww... thanks!
I'll pray for your father ... Sep 9 2005, 10:25 PM Paradox of Life I don't really like the rhyme scheme. All your... Sep 9 2005, 11:02 PM torngemini I liked it and I kinda like it when some people wr... Sep 10 2005, 01:08 AM
rinchan089 ^^^ Thanks, alot.
Personally, the poem isn't ... Sep 10 2005, 10:41 AM |
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