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Waiting, poem
racoons > you
post Aug 18 2005, 08:29 AM
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Another ditch in the road... you keep moving
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spice of life
indesicive flavours
f**k waiting for a saviour
chew some gum
sit under the old oak for a nap
save yourself with relaxation
celebration
variation
time flies by
friends drive by
drive by shootings
shot through the heart
while waiting under the old oak tree
spinning in a vacuum
sighing your wy into space
endless universe
endless life
lying under the old oak
just waiting...
 
 
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rinchan089
post Sep 6 2005, 10:08 PM
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What up, dawg?
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I think it's great! The last two lines really tie everything together.

Great job!

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