Waiting, poem |
 Aug 18 2005, 08:29 AM
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 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving  Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152  |
spice of life
indesicive flavours f**k waiting for a saviour chew some gum sit under the old oak for a nap save yourself with relaxation celebration variation time flies by friends drive by drive by shootings shot through the heart while waiting under the old oak tree spinning in a vacuum sighing your wy into space endless universe endless life lying under the old oak just waiting... |
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Sep 6 2005, 10:08 PM
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 What up, dawg? Group: Member Posts: 235 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 19,480 |
I think it's great! The last two lines really tie everything together.
Great job! Rin-chan |
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racoons > you Waiting Aug 18 2005, 08:29 AM
illumineering QUOTE(MarchHare2UrAlice @ Aug 18 2005, 9:29 A... Aug 18 2005, 09:10 AM stephinika nice job james. i like the storyline of this one a... Aug 18 2005, 01:58 PM kill.t3h.r0cK Haha, I love it. Agreed w/ illumineering, I'm ... Aug 18 2005, 04:59 PM pyrochick19770 ^ Might wanna resize the sig?
Great. <3 the gum... Aug 18 2005, 05:09 PM RiddleMeWonders James, you've got flow.
I love it. So freakin... Aug 18 2005, 10:56 PM LinLinxxkanna wow tat was awesome!!!! i really l... Sep 4 2005, 10:38 PM LoST SouL QUOTEf**k waiting for a saviour
chew some gum
tha... Sep 5 2005, 10:47 AM xstab.my.heartx I liked it. Sep 11 2005, 01:14 PM
torngemini that was freakin' awesome Sep 13 2005, 02:47 AM |
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