The Blunder, Forgive the Shakespearian nature of it. |
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 Feb 19 2005, 12:06 AM
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What an utter Utopian connection,
What gleeful, joyous bliss, What innocent affection, In the minds of two amiss. What tragic, punch drunk love, What a doeful, kiddish heart, What dew-bombing God's above, That allows this adieu, and part? What amazing facial features, What amazing dovelike grace, What prototype of creatures, With a fragile, porcelain face. What tears drop on my scribe, What anguish smears my ink, What woman so tremors the vibe, And disallows me to think? What amber golden hair, What irresistable spark, What lady, pure and fair, Have I left in the dark? Oh woe, upon me fall, For I have made a blunder, I've given up my doll, So smite me with thy thunder. |
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Sep 4 2005, 07:22 AM
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 Bardic Nation  Group: Member Posts: 1,113 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 38,059 |
very good, i agree with azarel on this one. 'All' might work.
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CrackedRearView The Blunder Feb 19 2005, 12:06 AM
stephinika i love it. every line. great job!! Feb 19 2005, 01:33 AM Azarel Forgive the Shakespearian nature of the piece? My ... Aug 9 2005, 03:18 PM not_your_average Very romantic. You manage to talk about love witho... Aug 10 2005, 04:54 PM mishyerr Very beautiful. ^_^ It's very delicious to rea... Aug 16 2005, 11:57 AM kill.t3h.r0cK I enjoyed it, I keep reading it over. It's rea... Aug 18 2005, 05:08 PM CallMeJealousy I thoughroughly enjoyed this Sep 4 2005, 01:52 AM
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