Another story, inspired by you aspiring authors =] |
Another story, inspired by you aspiring authors =] |
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a new story, hope it's not too boring... I started writing and then it got weird. Not really sad or emotional. Hope you like it. Probably won’t. I’m not good at this. X[
don't have a title yet.... cHapTER OnE: anais opened her eyes to a rude beeping sound ringing in her ears. reaching over to slap the snooze button and get another 15 minutes of zzzzzs, she angrily cursed the b*stard who thought up alarm clocks. she rolled over and pulled the covers up to her chin. just as she was drifting back into peaceful slumber, her mom marched in and pulled the curtains open. "rise and shine, sweet. busy day today!" she called, swooping up dirty clothes and cds from anais's floor, rubbing her daughters cheek in the preoccupied but loving way that mom's have. shielding her face from the warm light now streaming into her window, she opened one eye reluctantly. "why?" was all she was able to croak out suspiciously. "why's it a busy day?" her mom stared unhappily at a stray beanie baby and closed her eyes as if to shield them from the offending sight. "well, you've got school, and i've got work, and oh no i think it's my day to carpool to kyle's school, and i've got that lunch meeting, and oh, its not the 13th is it? oh good i've got that presentation that day, and oh jeez i'd better work on some paperwork if i get the chance, i don't want to bring it home...sweetie, you’d better order out for pizza or something.....oh goodness we don’t have dinner with richard’s family tonight? Oh gosh....." she went on, lost in her thoughts of her mental planner as she absentmindedly picked up anais’s mutilated math book and set it on her desk. Anais rolled her eyes and pulled herself out of bed, a bit relieved it wasn’t busy because of some forgotten physics test or something, and a bit irritated at the sound of richard’s name. Richard, the bozo her mom had been dating. She was sure he’d been stoned at least l4 times in the last year and judging by his immaculate and formal clothes, had never heard of Levis. Plus, he had the hottest son, Jason, which made things kind of awkward. He went to her school, too....a sophomore. She sighed just thinking about his dark hair and stunningly green eyes. His eyes. His eyes were what entranced her . They were like little pools of pea green slime. No....that wasn’t right. Pools of...er....god, there’s got to be something beautiful that’s green, she thought frustratedly. Kool-aid? She paused in her doorway, concentrating.. Her brother’s alarm brought her back to reality, and she remembered it was 7:22 and she was going to be late for school. Half awake, she trudged into the bathroom to take a hot shower. What about Pert Plus? she thought , staring at her mom's shampoos next to her own. That was green....yawn. ******************************************************************** |
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i agree with love[x]melissa
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