I'm Gonna Hate Myself, For this. Options

[EriaNight]

So I wrote a song...and recorded it in Pro Tools and I'm not very good at Pro Tools yet at least not like my mom. But I wrote all the music and lyrics and sang...

and yes I know my voice is awful, but if you want to hear it you can go here

::CLICKIE::

I hate my voice, but I love the lyrics so yeah. You'll have to turn up your volume because it exported kind of dull.

and yes it sounds even more awful because it's 3 mb mp3 and not the original tracks...

Oh well...just rate on a 1-10 scale and keep everything in mind. LOL I tried.
Edit://No auto-tuning was involved obviously. I detest Avril. I detest Auto-tuning. But i think i needed it...

[starlette]

okay u get advice from the person with the experience ahah j/k. For a first recording done by yourself, its really not bad. Vocally, you arent very mature, but you have a little bit of talent there that you could really develop into something good! The background is kinda cheesy, but its a great start. Protools huh? Thats some professional stuff right there. That you even know your way around it is very impressive. I think the arrangement of the vocals is pretty cool. very creative. I say thats a pretty darn good start. And that means a lot coming from me cuz I hate on everyone lol.

[EriaNight]

okay u get advice from the person with the experience ahah j/k.  For a first recording done by yourself, its really not bad.  Vocally, you arent very mature, but you have a little bit of talent there that you could really develop into something good!  The background is kinda cheesy, but its a great start.  Protools huh?  Thats some professional stuff right there.  That you even know your way around it is very impressive.  I think the arrangement of the vocals is pretty cool.  very creative.  I say thats a pretty darn good start.  And that means a lot coming from me cuz I hate on everyone lol.

Actually---my mom owns a recording studio so I kind of know a lot about the industry and vocals and stuff.

This is my mom... in the 80's

I just have NOT like practiced or used my voice in a while. so it sounded kind of ehhh like jumpy. I hadn't practice control of my dynamics or anything and it sounded bad. I should do another one when I get back into the whole singing thing. I do more filming than singing. I want to delete the drums and get my bro play--i was using them as a beat to stay in time. *shrug* I don't know though. I might just write a diff song.

But thank you!!

[starlette]

Actually---my mom owns a recording studio so I kind of know a lot about the industry and vocals and stuff.

This is my mom... in the 80's

I just have NOT like practiced or used my voice in a while. so it sounded kind of ehhh like jumpy. I hadn't practice control of my dynamics or anything and it sounded bad. I should do another one when I get back into the whole singing thing. I do more filming than singing. I want to delete the drums and get my bro play--i was using them as a beat to stay in time. *shrug* I don't know though. I might just write a diff song. 

But thank you!! 

Thats awesome. Thats what I'm doing with my life. I wanna be famous soooooooo bad. So I have a lot of respect for people who do anything musically. especially when they share, because its scary to put something you created up for scrutiny. I really think u did a good job. I hope I didn't make it sound like you didn't. I really do hear talent in your voice. Maybe you will have to do a song with me or write me a little something huh? :D