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 Aug 26 2005, 07:27 PM
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 speechless  Group: Member Posts: 869 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 163,564  |
my heart is broken
i try to fix it but nothings working i buy a new one it doesnt fit i try again countless times i have failed i want you to see can you see the best thing in front of you which is me ive mend my heart i sewed it up 13 stitches it hurts so much 6 weeks pass my heart has healed i guess i was blind cause now its clear i need you to see please can you see the greatest thing right in front of you which was me |
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Aug 28 2005, 07:09 PM
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 Bay Area YadadaDiiiig. Group: Official Member Posts: 4,249 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 103,202 |
^ agreed. it was like a pausing flow.
at least thats how i read it. |
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REBELnDISGUISE heart Aug 26 2005, 07:27 PM
yukichan i like it..it has good rhythim(sp?).. Aug 28 2005, 12:09 AM kill.t3h.r0cK Haha, agreed w/ both of them. It read very smooth. Aug 31 2005, 12:21 PM
Claudel smooth and nice :) Aug 31 2005, 01:55 PM |
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