disbelief, wow a new poem. =| |
disbelief, wow a new poem. =| |
| *stephinika* |
Aug 26 2005, 11:31 PM
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its been awhile since i've written anything really...
this isn't my best, but its okay i guess. basically discussing my current feelings. i'm still in disbelief at how things are right now...in a good way. enjoy and constructive criticism is always appreciated, thanks! Disbelief Despair no longer lingers Anger grows no more Gone are the constant feelings of loneliness. What once was No longer is; What you have done I thought nearly impossible But yet You’ve miraculously done it. It’s not quite known how, when, or where But somewhere along the timeline of the past It happened. Such simple actions from you Create such a stir from within me; A small glance, a mere smile And suddenly I’m captivated. You once were the cause Of tumultuous emotion And your faith in one’s self Was lacking in amounts; You and I were unknowingly one But one and the same As I shielded my thoughts, my feelings, my fears. Now, forgiveness has been granted The heart is sure it’s deserved And the point such beings as you and I are at now Seemed but an impossible moment in the desires of our mentalities And each of us presently Utterly proved incorrect Much to our disbelieving delights. |
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Aug 28 2005, 09:55 AM
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Steph, I'm so glad that things are better for you. Have fun in Vegas and enjoy time with you-know-who.
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stephinika disbelief Aug 26 2005, 11:31 PM
Insecure Emotions oooh..this is a really great poem! it had good... Aug 27 2005, 09:23 PM
stephinika thanks guys.
to put it simply - years ago, me and... Sep 5 2005, 07:12 PM![]() ![]() |