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Tonight, Acoustic song for Beth
*RockizLife*
post Aug 11 2005, 03:41 PM
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To my friend Beth.

Tonight

This is my thanks to you
For all you've done and still do
For all the times I was alone at night
Then thinking about how you make my days bright
And teaching me to have confidence
For making life not seem so dense

Tonight we'll fly away
And laugh at those who said it's impossible
We'll fly towards tomorrow today
With you, everything is plausible
With the stars as our ceiling
The sea as our floor
We'll find our friendship is more then a feeling
It's what makes us soar

I'll be here when your world turns upside down
When your beautiful smile turns into a frown
To try my best to make it better for you
For your happiness there's nothing in this world I won't do
And in the times you have to fly on your own
I'll be down here waiting without feelings of being alone
Because you will always have a place in my heart
Something that is impossible is for us to be apart

Tonight we'll fly away
And laugh at those who said it's impossible
We'll fly towards tomorrow today
With you, everything is plausible
With the stars as our ceiling
The sea as our floor
We'll find our friendship is more then a feeling
It's what makes us soar

Forget about our past
We'll make this moment last
I'll watch the wind comb your hair
As we fly through midnights air
See the stars glimmer in the sea
Nothing more perfect could ever be

Tonight we'll fly away
And laugh at those who said it's impossible
We'll fly towards tomorrow today
With you, everything is plausible
With the stars as our ceiling
The sea as our floor
We'll find our friendship is more then a feeling
It's what makes us soar

My friend, I love you
You're more beautiful then the heavens above you
You make life feel right
So let's leave, let's fly away tonight
 
 
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*RockizLife*
post Aug 22 2005, 10:06 PM
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^ Haha, cool. But, remember, it's not a poem and songs either do or don't have much rhyme scheme, if any at all. It's ok, you don't know what you're talking about happy.gif Trust me, I took a singing/song writing course at school.

And Beth LOVED it, and that's all that matters. She pinned it up on her wall cool.gif
 

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RockizLife   Tonight   Aug 11 2005, 03:41 PM
Paradox of Life   Corny and cliche. You keep changing rhyming scheme...   Aug 11 2005, 04:12 PM
..:loveee.NuTTii   ^Wow...that's rough. I'm sorry, but I hav...   Aug 16 2005, 06:26 PM
RockizLife   ^ Haha, cool. But, remember, it's not a poem a...   Aug 22 2005, 10:06 PM
reflection   sorry but i have to agree that the rhyme scheme wa...   Aug 23 2005, 09:40 AM


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