princess of drums, preconcepted from an old work epic preq. Options

[RiddleMeWonders]

Princess of Drums

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To arms in hearts held away.
trust that the diamonds are safe
from this place and it's people
so greedy yet regal with taste
finally floating down stream
reinforcements are needed it seems.
in the face of my enemies
spitting out requests of death
and disembowlment
I won a battle of words
as one of our own arrows
took me to my maker
sooner than I expected
who betrayed the princess of drums?
till time lay down to bow to my father
his foot steps quiet yet cracking the earth in their wake
held me in his hands and set me back down
as if a witness of my passing from above was not (enough)
a wind of his breath woke me from my dream of life
and saw the towers of ivory, of costing peace
a strange creature sat on my chest and pressed it's foot to my head
and was again asleep in our longhouse
with our people and the arrow gone
a hole in my heart still healing
but scarred not the same, not untouched
I felt great pain, the numbest throbbing is still with (me)
but more than water loves it's own
(I) want to go back to that place
for now revenge will be my mission
this I have told you Motsumat.
I, Drumelia, have returned.

[WhiteLotus*]

Ah, I like it. I like how it has a story, and I can totally picture a rhythemtic beat. Very cool and creative.