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agirlnamed_aly
post Apr 12 2005, 09:14 PM
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the alcohol never tasted so sweet
on the tip of your tongue
while the world was so bitter
because we were young
the long lived glances
and short lived loves
"forevers" that we threw around
because "for now" wasn't enough
how ugly you can feel
because of one person in the room
and how blood wasn't red
until you saw it coming from the wound
and life wasn't as simple
as we thought in second grade
and people weren't as nice
as they were when you were eight
and "beautiful" wasn't a word
you really liked to use
because hearts were just as weak
even when they were immune
and goodbye and hello
were somehow the same thing
and every lasting moment
was still momentarily
and everything you said
was as simple as it sounded
because complications were more rational
then how i really found it
so i hope when you're dying
you won't enjoy the view
because words never meant much
when they were coming from you

Don't worry, it's not supposed to make sense. Sorry for the lack of capitalization, I wrote it a long time ago and didn't want to take the time to edit it.

Mucho love,

Alyson
 
 
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..:loveee.NuTTii
post Aug 17 2005, 07:44 AM
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That was great. I especially liked ""forevers" that we threw around
because "for now" wasn't enough". It seemed full of depth yet I was able to follow it.
 

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agirlnamed_aly   Words   Apr 12 2005, 09:14 PM
stephinika   i actually quite like it...nice word choices and i...   Apr 12 2005, 10:06 PM
skateforfree   QUOTE(stephinika @ Apr 12 2005, 9:06 PM)i act...   Apr 22 2005, 09:52 PM
pingpang_0811   i love this sentence the long lived glances and s...   Apr 13 2005, 12:10 PM
mishyerr   Very good, I don't understand how you think we...   Apr 13 2005, 04:32 PM
PAULiNE_x   Yes, this is definitely my favorite from you. xo,...   Apr 17 2005, 03:51 AM
mzkandi   This was really excellent. Goodness, great job.   Apr 17 2005, 05:07 AM
gladz612   fantastic job!   Apr 21 2005, 11:41 AM
pingpang_0811   i read it the second time. i have one more sentenc...   Apr 21 2005, 12:17 PM
FoOd   I absolutely adore it. Its really nice. You sho...   Apr 22 2005, 10:19 PM
lidoxangie   ------   Apr 22 2005, 11:57 PM
xSWEETxCANDiix   I love it. I can understand it. It's fantastic   Apr 23 2005, 12:28 AM
toodlepops.   Really nice. =]   Apr 25 2005, 12:27 AM
Azarel   Even if you can't spell laundry, you've de...   Aug 9 2005, 03:49 PM
b0st0ngrl   Excellent! I love the part where it says ...   Aug 11 2005, 09:42 PM
mipadi   QUOTE(agirlnamed_aly @ Apr 12 2005, 10:14 PM)...   Aug 11 2005, 09:45 PM
Paradox of Life   WOW. This is amazing. From the start I knew it was...   Aug 13 2005, 06:38 PM
..:loveee.NuTTii   That was great. I especially liked ""for...   Aug 17 2005, 07:44 AM
mai_z   that was beautiful....simple words make it absolut...   Aug 18 2005, 11:39 AM


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