Words, Just read it. |
Words, Just read it. |
Apr 12 2005, 09:14 PM
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I'd rather make mistakes than break. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 121 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 117,869 |
the alcohol never tasted so sweet
on the tip of your tongue while the world was so bitter because we were young the long lived glances and short lived loves "forevers" that we threw around because "for now" wasn't enough how ugly you can feel because of one person in the room and how blood wasn't red until you saw it coming from the wound and life wasn't as simple as we thought in second grade and people weren't as nice as they were when you were eight and "beautiful" wasn't a word you really liked to use because hearts were just as weak even when they were immune and goodbye and hello were somehow the same thing and every lasting moment was still momentarily and everything you said was as simple as it sounded because complications were more rational then how i really found it so i hope when you're dying you won't enjoy the view because words never meant much when they were coming from you Don't worry, it's not supposed to make sense. Sorry for the lack of capitalization, I wrote it a long time ago and didn't want to take the time to edit it. Mucho love, Alyson |
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Aug 11 2005, 09:42 PM
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![]() No Day But Today. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,405 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 99,184 |
Excellent! I love the part where it says "'forevers' that we threw around
because 'for now' wasn't enough" I like it a lot :) |
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agirlnamed_aly Words Apr 12 2005, 09:14 PM
stephinika i actually quite like it...nice word choices and i... Apr 12 2005, 10:06 PM
skateforfree QUOTE(stephinika @ Apr 12 2005, 9:06 PM)i act... Apr 22 2005, 09:52 PM
pingpang_0811 i love this sentence
the long lived glances
and s... Apr 13 2005, 12:10 PM
mishyerr Very good, I don't understand how you think we... Apr 13 2005, 04:32 PM
PAULiNE_x Yes, this is definitely my favorite from you.
xo,... Apr 17 2005, 03:51 AM
mzkandi This was really excellent. Goodness, great job. Apr 17 2005, 05:07 AM
gladz612 fantastic job! Apr 21 2005, 11:41 AM
pingpang_0811 i read it the second time.
i have one more sentenc... Apr 21 2005, 12:17 PM
FoOd I absolutely adore it. Its really nice.
You sho... Apr 22 2005, 10:19 PM
lidoxangie ------ Apr 22 2005, 11:57 PM
xSWEETxCANDiix I love it. I can understand it. It's fantastic Apr 23 2005, 12:28 AM
toodlepops. Really nice. =] Apr 25 2005, 12:27 AM
Azarel Even if you can't spell laundry, you've de... Aug 9 2005, 03:49 PM
mipadi QUOTE(agirlnamed_aly @ Apr 12 2005, 10:14 PM)... Aug 11 2005, 09:45 PM
Paradox of Life WOW. This is amazing. From the start I knew it was... Aug 13 2005, 06:38 PM
..:loveee.NuTTii That was great. I especially liked ""for... Aug 17 2005, 07:44 AM
mai_z that was beautiful....simple words make it absolut... Aug 18 2005, 11:39 AM![]() ![]() |