A Suburban Existence |
| *not_your_average* |
 Aug 10 2005, 04:37 PM
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Well, some of you, being much better writers than me, said this needed a rewrite. Taking your points of view into consideration, I cringed after reading my essay/story. So I'll try to get a rewrite in when I can.
This post has been edited by not_your_average: Aug 13 2005, 10:18 AM |
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| *mipadi* |
Aug 10 2005, 10:06 PM
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I think there's at least a foundation of irony involved, in the fact that was is described as "perfect" is anything but.
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not_your_average A Suburban Existence Aug 10 2005, 04:37 PM
Azarel The shift from singular to plural is awkward (my t... Aug 10 2005, 07:44 PM illumineering I find nothing that reflects perfection in suburbi... Aug 10 2005, 09:37 PM
mipadi QUOTE(illumineering @ Aug 10 2005, 10:37 PM)H... Aug 10 2005, 09:41 PM
illumineering QUOTE(mipadi @ Aug 10 2005, 10:41 PM)Irony, p... Aug 10 2005, 10:02 PM not_your_average QUOTE(illumineering @ Aug 10 2005, 9:37 PM)Ho... Aug 13 2005, 10:39 AM |
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