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| *not_your_average* |
 Aug 10 2005, 04:37 PM
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Well, some of you, being much better writers than me, said this needed a rewrite. Taking your points of view into consideration, I cringed after reading my essay/story. So I'll try to get a rewrite in when I can.
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Aug 10 2005, 09:37 PM
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 I love Havasupai  Group: Member Posts: 1,040 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 163,878 |
I find nothing that reflects perfection in suburbia. The artifical nature of "cookie cutter houses" is as uninspiring as a wet noodle in the garbage. For me, life is far more than shirt collars, gossip, minivans and a flat-screen TV.
How could you despise perfection? The suburban existence you describe is far from it. |
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| *mipadi* |
Aug 10 2005, 09:41 PM
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QUOTE(illumineering @ Aug 10 2005, 10:37 PM) How could you despise perfection? The suburban existence you describe is far from it.  Irony, perhaps? The fact that at one time, the things in the piece would have been considered perfection, but truly are not. |
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not_your_average A Suburban Existence Aug 10 2005, 04:37 PM
Azarel The shift from singular to plural is awkward (my t... Aug 10 2005, 07:44 PM
illumineering QUOTE(mipadi @ Aug 10 2005, 10:41 PM)Irony, p... Aug 10 2005, 10:02 PM not_your_average QUOTE(illumineering @ Aug 10 2005, 9:37 PM)Ho... Aug 13 2005, 10:39 AM mipadi I think there's at least a foundation of irony... Aug 10 2005, 10:06 PM |
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