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 Oct 5 2004, 10:42 PM
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 Will write poetry for sex!  Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600  |
Ah, yet another quickie.
Home Why is it, thought is home? The broken home, Unbearable and torturous. The memories you run from Hung up on picture frames Crooked with the smile You've always tried to understand. Skies blotched with blood You've only dreamt of bleeding. Your only sanctuary Overcoated with the nightmares You face only on your knees Praying to a false god. |
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Aug 9 2005, 02:59 PM
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Again, old topic since you don't even visit anymore. But regardless, this is well written. I like your usage of imagery, even if it is dismal and dark.
QUOTE(MasteRxKiD @ Oct 12 2004, 5:58 PM) I also wanted to give the poem a touch of hopelessness at the end... Success.
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MasteRxKiD home Oct 5 2004, 10:42 PM
rainnydaiis hmmm i dont really get this but its so interesting... Oct 5 2004, 11:19 PM MasteRxKiD LoL, I caught myself in deep contemplation again a... Oct 6 2004, 12:00 AM xtremeliquid Hm...nice? Oct 6 2004, 12:40 AM MasteRxKiD Haha, you don't sound too sure of that one the... Oct 6 2004, 02:22 AM dreamerOi hm seems mixed but i really like it haa. Oct 12 2004, 12:41 AM MasteRxKiD Mixed? I don't really get you...
I made the po... Oct 12 2004, 02:01 PM omg_melface QUOTE(MasteRxKiD @ Oct 5 2004, 9:42 PM)The me... Oct 12 2004, 05:04 PM MasteRxKiD Haha, thanks.
It happens to be my favorite part to... Oct 12 2004, 05:58 PM dreamerOi QUOTE(MasteRxKiD @ Oct 12 2004, 2:01 PM)Mixed... Oct 12 2004, 06:00 PM MasteRxKiD Which part?
Maybe I can try and explain it if you... Oct 12 2004, 06:46 PM dreamerOi QUOTE(MasteRxKiD @ Oct 5 2004, 10:42 PM)The m... Oct 12 2004, 06:50 PM MasteRxKiD 'The memories you run from, hung up on picture... Oct 12 2004, 07:53 PM rainnydaiis you know i just reread it and i got your point on ... Oct 12 2004, 07:55 PM MasteRxKiD Err, I'll get into it if you want, But I have ... Oct 12 2004, 07:58 PM rainnydaiis I'll type proper now. I get it, it actually gi... Oct 12 2004, 08:01 PM dreamerOi haha me too thanks a bunch Oct 12 2004, 08:14 PM MasteRxKiD Glad I could provide some insight for my writing. Oct 13 2004, 12:29 AM Kathleen I DON'T GET IT. *Scratches head*
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