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 Oct 18 2004, 10:49 PM
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out of breath
paper balloon, i say, get up, and glide towards the sun. i shall, says redstained ball. let me rest awhile, and i'll run when merriment comes. paper balloon, i say, roll down hills, and lie on the grass. i can't, says persimmon ball. your happiness didn't last, imperfectly numb. paper balloon, i say, will you play with me again? i won't, says crimson ball. fill me with laughter, not pain. but my breath is gone ...i say. |
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| *Azarel* |
Aug 9 2005, 02:40 PM
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Yeah. So I'm bringing back good writings. Get over it.
I really like this, Queen. The subject matter is different - and your words are simplistic, yet they paint beautiful images. 
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synkro out of breath Oct 18 2004, 10:49 PM
jambaJUICE niice.
inspired by hidden feelings and ur paper S... Oct 18 2004, 11:17 PM LoserLuvS lol. woho! i could almost feel myself ran out ... Oct 19 2004, 11:50 AM synkro QUOTE(jambaJUICE @ Oct 18 2004, 8:17 PM)niice... Oct 21 2004, 02:42 PM MasteRxKiD I get this really light, and soothing tone from th... Oct 21 2004, 04:26 PM
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