Love Across The Ocean, my version Options

[Raiu]

this is my own version of koda kumi's love across the ocean. let me know what ya think

Everytime I walk by the ocean
I remember your face that day
You're words are so clear to me
That you told me that day

Everytime I look at the sea I feel strong
Because I'm better without you
But when I'm alone
My mind goes back to you

All this cannot be right everything I'm feeling
You are gone now that's how it should be
But when the melody plays I just want to hold you
Oceans Apart
Longing to be with you again

Yesturday I found that picture
We looked so happy in the park
Why couldn't we have just stayed like that?
Because right now I just want to hold you

My emotions are all mixed up thanks to you
And I have a headache that won't go
Should I have made you stay
Or would that be wrong?

Now this is all your fault my heads going round in circles
I try to clear it but then you come back
Is it enough now that you know I love you
Oceans apart
Longing to be with you again

Now that you've changed my life with a simple smile
My thoughts dwell on you but I don't want to
It's time I made up my mind just where do we stand?
Oceans apart
Longing to be with you again

All this cannot be right everything I'm feeling
You are gone now that's how it should be
But when the melody plays I just want to hold you
Oceans Apart
Longing to be with you again