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Les Mis, i made
shortchang
post Aug 3 2005, 01:55 PM
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heres the result of about 20 minutes on psp9 (bored)

its lyrics are from the song "on my own" from les miserables :)

constructive criticism (sp?) and comments please! :)


^ click ::

i dont know why the font is all ugly looking :( help me!

thanks!!
 
 
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technicolour
post Aug 3 2005, 02:32 PM
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It is too dark. And there's a line going down to the right.

Brighten it up, and yea?


Maybe you should change the font. Scriptina is so overused and, well, frankly something else would look alot better, IMO.
 

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