dreams, not your average rap |
 Jul 18 2005, 05:51 PM
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I wont give up//
Fall down shut up// I mean down// Having a frown on my face// I will just keep going at this steady pace// Watching people race then crash// Getting bashed against the wall of life// Having “wives”, and cheating// Being deceiving// So ill be leading// While everyone is still deceiving// I may only be 14// “Hey you’re just another teen!”// Y’all just being mean// But I’m not going to give up// Or fall out// I have dreams// Like the games dreams// And games is my dream// I will become a soccer player// So ill think it// Seize it// Breath it// Maintain// Keep it// Hold it// Control it// And never let go of it// |
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Jul 23 2005, 01:23 AM
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 My name's Katt. Nice to meet you! Group: Member Posts: 3,826 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,674 |
Wow, that's very emotional and the rhymes and flow go together perfectly. Keep up the good work. We need good rappers on CB.
 
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imreallytrue dreams Jul 18 2005, 05:51 PM
elmogurly thats awesome, but i dont really know rap, but goo... Jul 18 2005, 05:52 PM xXMomoBubbleTeaXx I know don't ever let someone tell you to stop... Jul 19 2005, 05:39 PM _suzie_ that reminds me of when i was 14. all i wanted to ... Jul 21 2005, 11:17 AM ..:loveee.NuTTii Wow that was amazing and very moving. I like the ... Jul 21 2005, 04:38 PM SMiLEEFORMEE nice work! Jul 21 2005, 04:39 PM basick holy shit that was so ill Jul 23 2005, 12:41 AM
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